tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7306900591538708551.post7426091554676984333..comments2023-06-08T03:17:09.330-07:00Comments on Did I Digress?: Friday Fluff Part IILiz the Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15910096677909941425noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7306900591538708551.post-50951350264411196332007-11-12T09:14:00.000-08:002007-11-12T09:14:00.000-08:00Liz - this is really good stuff. One writer to ano...Liz - this is really good stuff. One writer to another. I'll send you my first chapter if you wanna swap. I'd love feedback. But seriously - I've read drivle and this is not it. Keep going. :DMs. Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08610613067782656189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7306900591538708551.post-37886948626612409212007-11-09T17:58:00.000-08:002007-11-09T17:58:00.000-08:00I really want to know more about Abbott and Otterv...I really want to know more about Abbott and Otterville. If it were crap, I wouldn't care. Keep going with it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7306900591538708551.post-57705703107822858862007-11-09T13:59:00.000-08:002007-11-09T13:59:00.000-08:00Totally cute. I'd like to hear more from Abbott. A...Totally cute. I'd like to hear more from Abbott. Amazing that in just 4 paragraphs you've already pulled me into her character.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03020121868998000309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7306900591538708551.post-66452392656548494572007-11-09T12:58:00.000-08:002007-11-09T12:58:00.000-08:00I think you are both reading my stuff with friends...I think you are both reading my stuff with friendship-colored glasses (and I love you for that). <BR/><BR/>But, really, it's bad. Run-on sentences, choppy transitions, etc.<BR/><BR/>And that's okay. I've accepted that no one can put out a masterpiece in a month. The point is to just get the ideas out there.<BR/><BR/>I haven't really read back through all the drivel called my novel, but I can bet that I have a few lines I'll keep, a few characters that I'll let hang around, and a few twists in the plot that will remain. <BR/><BR/>A lot of it though, will go away. And I'm alright with that. This whole thing has taught me a valuable lesson in self-discipline. And it has also taught me that I like writing--crap and all.<BR/><BR/>It's making me lean more towards an MFA in Creative Writing than I thought it would.<BR/><BR/>AND LAURA, KEEP WRITING!!!!! <BR/><BR/>I MEAN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Liz the Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15910096677909941425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7306900591538708551.post-39588502396024022662007-11-09T12:46:00.000-08:002007-11-09T12:46:00.000-08:00I agree with Andrea. If you think this is crap, w...I agree with Andrea. If you think this is crap, wait 'til you see mine. Not that I'm going to actually let you see it. Seeing how good this is seriously makes me feel like not finishing.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08222717266527397554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7306900591538708551.post-58844624891757424812007-11-09T10:26:00.000-08:002007-11-09T10:26:00.000-08:00Of course I'm going to comment! I think its great...Of course I'm going to comment! I think its great! I'd love to read more!!!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00726932051133705968noreply@blogger.com